Poetry Challenge #269-With No Particular Place to Go
So what is it about those Russian writers of old? Was it something in the ice? the snow? … the vodka?
For example, because it’s his 204th birthday (Nov 9, 1818), let’s consider, Ivan Sergyevitch Turgenev . Ivan came from Russian nobility. He was born in Orel, more than a hundred miles south of Moscow to a family with expectations. After university, he joined the Ministry of the Interior at St. Petersburg, but his passion was writing. Like so many other mothers, his wanted him to make good—and so after he resigned from the Ministry, she cut off his allowance. “See where that gets you?” she thought! And Turgenev did!
He wrote verses, comedies and novels, the first published being “A Sportsman’s Sketches,” which, after Russian sentiments changed cast him under suspicion. An admirer and friend of Dostoevsky, during his time Turgenev was considered among the great living Russian writers and while his writing was “Russian” his style was more Western European in its economy of means and language. “Fathers and Children” and “A House of Gentlefolk” are considered his best work.
Turgenev was an avid hunter who spent much time in the woods.
His poems (like the two below)—more prose poems—ramble along in a conversational tone that gently introduce readers to the scene and allowing events to unfold in a way that mimics an actually ramble through the woods.
Poetry Challenge #269
With No Particular Place to Go
As an homage to Ivan, write a prose poem about a walk you might take on any given day. What might you see along the way?
To lend it a conversational tone, imagine you are narrating the scene as you walk.
Describe it in such a way that readers feel as though they are walking with you.
Set Your Timer for 7 Minutes
Start Writing!
Don’t Think About it, just. . .
Ramble on! As if you, too —in the midst of an icy Russian winter— had no particular place to go…except where your imagination takes you!
Cindy Faughnan and I began this 7-Minute Poetry Challenge 2000+ days ago. Now we take turns creating prompts to share with you. Our hope is that creatives—children & adults—will use our prompts as springboards to word play time. If you join us in the Challenge, let us know by posting the title, a note, or if you want, the whole poem in the comments.
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Fin Pal asks Norman "Are You Famous?"
Have you read the Norman the Goldfish books, NOT NORMAN and NORMAN ONE AMAZING GOLDFISH? Have your friends read them? (They are available in your library and bookstores.)
So then, what do you think Norman will say? Is he famous?
Ready to read Norman’s answer? Scroll down . . .
Glug
Glug
Glug . . .
But first a finny!
Q: Why did the burglar try to steal Norman?
Q: Why did the burglar steal the goldfish?
A: Because Norman is 100% pure gold! Get it? Norman the Goldfish!
Do you have a question for Norman the Goldfish- about friends, school, pets, family, life in and outside the fishbowl? Send him a letter!
Don’t forget to order your copy of NOT NORMAN: A GOLDFISH STORY and NORMAN: ONE AMAZING GOLDFISH!!
Poetry Challenge #268-Playing with Lines
I recall a few truths about lines from Geometry 101: A line can move in both directions; it has no beginning and no end with an endless number of points in between.
I saw these truths in black on white during a recent field trip to Governor’s Island* where artist Shantell Martin’s black line scribbles transformed Our Lady Star, a former Catholic Church now decommissioned Military Chapel, into art of endless possibility.
Shantell Martin plays with lines, curving, bending them, twisting them into ideas, figures, words—remind us we can too!
Poetry Challenge #268
Playing with Lines
Recently on Twitter someone quoted the following line**, set up as a poem:
do what you love
and you’ll never
work a day
in your life
People were asked to replace the first and third lines to make a new poem. For example:
use doritos as forks
and you’ll never
wash a fork
in your life
Your turn! Rewrite the above poem with your own new first and third line. Then choose another saying by Confucius, write it as a 4-line poem, and replace that first and third line. You can search for your own Confucius saying or use one of these:
Everything has beauty, but not everyone sees it.
They must often change who would be constant in happiness or wisdom.
It does not matter how slowly you go as long as you do not stop.
He who knows all the answers has not been asked all the questions.
Ala Judith Kerman, choose a word, any word and define that word in a poem. You might choose a more abstract word, as Judith did in “Air” or you might choose a concrete word as in her poem, “Elephant.” (Scroll down for the YouTube of Judith reading “Elephant.”)
Include as many possible definitions of the word as possible—feel free to use a dictionary. And bust out with your own definitions of the word.
Form-wise you might choose to simply list definitions ala Webster, as in “Air,” or shape them into Free Verse as in “Elephant,” or choose some other poetic form.
Set Your Timer for 7 Minutes
Start Writing!
Don’t Think About it, just write It!
*Govenor’s Island is a 178 public space in the heart of New York Harbor, just a short FREE Ferry ride from Manhattan. It’s open year-round and is a delightful place to walk, ride bikes, laze—there’s a grand junkyard playground, a “formal” tidy playground, learning garden, food, a day SPA, a FREE Art Center, way cool “deserted” former Military housing and forts, Glamping—and a hill to climb—not high—with the most glorious views of The Statue of Liberty, Manhattan, Brookly, New Jersey and beyond.
**This quotation is attributed to a huge number of people, including Confucius.
Cindy Faughnan and I began this 7-Minute Poetry Challenge 2000+ days ago. Now we take turns creating prompts to share with you. Our hope is that creatives—children & adults—will use our prompts as springboards to word play time. If you join us in the Challenge, let us know by posting the title, a note, or if you want, the whole poem in the comments.
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What Inspires Me? Women in Baseball
Baseball! Baseball! Baseball! As I write the World Series 2022—Phillies vs Astros or Astros vs Phillies—which team goes first at this point is still anyone’s bet!
This past spring and summer—through the more than 3-month long MLB owner-imposed Lockout, frenetic Spring Training, Regular and Post-season MLB 2022 — Shohei Ohtoni chasing Babe Ruth’s pitching records; Aaron Judge chasing Roger Maris’s season home run record; who was playing well, playing bad, losing, winning… it’s been about the guys!
I was really, really wanting to post a clip of that scene but couldn’t figure it out. So, if you want to watch the There’s No Crying in Baseball Scene click here. I won’t blame you—then come back!)
But…
In the movie “A League of Their Own” Tom Hanks playing team manager Jimmy Dugan wails, “There’s no crying in baseball!”
Notice, Jimmy Dugan (maybe my favorite baseball coach ever) didn’t say there are no women in baseball. He didn’t say it then. And he absolutely would not say it now. Because while there may not be many women MLB players now/yet. There most certainly are women in baseball!
We’re talking . . .
Women in the Big Leagues Baby! The MLB!
Women of various backgrounds, ethnicities, ages—
Female General Manager!
Female Managers!
Female Coaches!
Female Scouts!
Female Player’s too!
The writing is on the wall at the Louisville Slugger Muesum and Factory:
“We’re going to have women playing professionally (in MLB)”
These photos featuring some of the women working in the MLB this year, 2022. I write “some” because there are more! —many behind the scenes—and many ahead of the game (watch it, that “lady” in the stands might be a scout!)
These profiles grace the walls of the Louisville Slugger Museum and Factory. I snapped them on a recent visit—that’s an inspiring place too! (Another post; another time). Right now, today, while the teams, players, fans—the world—is buzzing with World Series 2022
