Poetry Challenge #273-Akiko Yosano
There are days when I do not want to write a poem—because I don’t want to do the thinking that goes into choosing a topic or form or emotion or or or…Those days Haiku is our default. Haiku is one of the first poetry forms students learn because it’s short: 3 lines, rules are specific: 17 syllables 5-7-5, and the topic preset: nature. Even better, as Cindy taught me: singing the beginning of Moonlight in Vermont sets the Haiku rhythm.
Before Haiku there was the Tanka. A tanka is a 5-line 31-sylable poem that is actually 2 poems. The first being a complete haiku—in which the “nature” is often more human based. The second poem portion of a tanka is a response or reflection on the first.
“snow and stars shine on her disheveled hair; ginkgo leaves scatter in the sunset; the nightingale sleeps with doubled-up jeweled claws.””
Tanka are more nuanced in ways that are unique to Japanese and difficult to discuss in English terms, for that reason, many of those published in English are translations from Japanese, especially the works of Akiko Yosano whose tanka incorporate vivid, sensual images and frank freshness that were startling—for their time, and especially coming from a woman—and still surprising and evocative today.
Akiko Yosano, born on Dec. 7, 1878, is the pen name of this Japanese author, poet, pioneering feminist, pacifist, and social reformer. Her real name was Yosano Shiyo, “Ho Sho.” Akiko began writing poetry in high school and published her first volume of poetry in her early 20s, entitled Midaregami (Tangled Hair), the collection included 400 tanka poems. Before her death in 1942, Akiko published about 20 volumes of Tanka. Here are translations of a few of her poems:
Poetry Challenge #273
Tanka Like Akiko
In honor of Akiko Yosano, let’s try our pens at creating a tanka with a theme of love, passion, life.
Tanka are five-lines long with a set number of syllables in each line: 5-7-5-7-7. They consist of 2 parts that are actually more like two separate poems. The first poem is a 3-lines of 17 syllables, with 5 syllables in the 1st line, 7 in the second and 5 in the third. The 2nd poem has two 7 syllable lines.
Begin by creating the first poem incorporating nature to create a metaphor or simile to describe a human or human trait.
The last 2 line poem respond to/reflect upon the first part.
Once the two poems are created, complete the poem by rework the 3rd line of the haiku to include engo (en-goh): words act as a binder between the upper and lower poem to help connect the two parts and complete the tanka.
Set Your Timer for 7 Minutes
Start Writing!
Don’t Think About it, Tanka!
Cindy Faughnan and I began this 7-Minute Poetry Challenge 2400+ days ago. Now we take turns creating prompts to share with you. Our hope is that creatives—children & adults—will use our prompts as springboards to word play time. If you join us in the Challenge, let us know by posting the title, a note, or if you want, the whole poem in the comments.
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